Hi Jayden here at Awahono School. I liked how you used descriptive words in your poem. I also liked how you used your senses in your poem. Maybe next time you could add more writing to your poem. If you changed something in this poem what would it be and why would you change it click on the link to see my bloghttp://awahonojaydens.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi Ashton, Blake here from Awahono School. I really enjoyed you description about volleyball, because the words you use to describe different things were great and made it more interesting to read. Have you thought about putting it on a doccument, because the slide only had one page? If you want you can visit my blog blog.http://awahonoblaked.blogspot.co.nz/ Kind regards, Blake
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ReplyDeleteHi Jayden here at Awahono School. I liked how you used descriptive words in your poem. I also liked how you used your senses in your poem. Maybe next time you could add more writing to your poem. If you changed something in this poem what would it be and why would you change it click on the link to see my bloghttp://awahonojaydens.blogspot.co.nz/
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ReplyDeleteBlake here from Awahono School. I really enjoyed you description about volleyball, because the words you use to describe different things were great and made it more interesting to read. Have you thought about putting it on a doccument, because the slide only had one page? If you want you can visit my blog blog.http://awahonoblaked.blogspot.co.nz/
Kind regards, Blake